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[The Clown Downstairs]

Thoroughly Disturbing

I think that the entire mood started off perfectly. The lack of music made the ehthereal, airy sounds much more prevelant and keep the viewer focused on the action.

When I saw the clown I found the fact that his eyes were always in motion made them stand out, attracting attention to them made it creepier. Not to mention the brilliant art of the enitre animation throughout.

When the bug crawls through the clown you can almost feel it, it's uncomfortable and that's just what it should be.

The stomach spitting the bug out was a nice, gross touch.

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

thanks very much, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[a perfect life]

Surprising

For you're first flash i'm very impressed.

A few things though.

For one I noticed that the person is a tad disproportioned and that when he breathes his whole body swells.

I was also disappointed to see the lack of detail in the face, especially after seeing how well you drew and animated his hands.

The plot is self was not bad, though nothing very original or new. I would certainly enjoy it though.

lespringatomic responds:

Yeah, I know for the faces...

Its because I was new to that kind of face drawing (anime - manga) and I thought it would be easier to animate.

next time I'll try something different.